my own stan(d)

i read your poems
i think they're really good
but i think as an author
your slightly misunderstood
i dont know what it is
i cant quite place my finger
some arnt so memorable
but some tend to linger
i really like the ones
about the girl and they guy
its to bad for you it went sour
the relationship didnt survive
some that i read though
make no sense at all
i suppose in the end
thats what youd call
abstract imagry
the escape of the mind
but you should stay focused
and youll be doin just fine
some of the new ones though man
are really sad and depressed
though i still love to read em
a man and his misery left me very impressed
but still maybe you
should take some time to explain
where all these poems come from
why they're in your brain
i think people become alienated
when they dont understand
the words that your writing
and how they are planned
why they are penned
the way that they are
and what is the purpose
behind the bizarre
but anyways i just wrote this
to say ill keep reading
it seems like your writing
may be the reason your breating