Wednesday, December 21, 2005

September 22, 1991

i should introduce this poem a little so your not to comfused. im going to write a series of letters between two brothers over a period of years. im not sure where its going, but i thought it would be a fun challenging project, and at the same time would help me sharpen my pen. so i hope you enjoy and tell me what you think. oh and if you can think of good names im not accepting applications.

dear brother i miss you
and weve only been apart a while
lifes been good at home
moms still full of laughs and smiles
its funny i finally have
all the space i always wanted
but i wont take over your rooms
ill leave it alone just like i promised
though the parents may take
and turn it into an office
but ill do what i can
when they start to stop it
how is the college
have you been lost or lonely?
are there losts of hot chicks
that look lost and horny?
speaking of hot chicks
the girl friend is great
we go out all the time
on date after date
lately though im nevrvous
shes getting quite serious
talkin all about our future
but im like "im not tryin to be hearin this"
i mean i know that i love her
i guess i need some advice
your a pro man
you know all about love life
lets see real quick
what else have i forgotten
oh did i tell you
your totally awesome?
the cars running fine
and work as been fun
schools going smoothly
and this i gotta run
jenny just got here
and demands my attention
but there is one more thing
that i need to mention
i do miss you brother
so write me back soon
and ill keep up my promise
of protecting your room

love ______

3 Comments:

At 11:50 AM, Blogger Kristi B. said...

Hope you had a Merry Christmas, and Happy New Year to ya' as well.

 
At 4:46 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Comming for some one who knows you I was confused and I thought where do this come from, but I like it anyway. I felt a brother connection.

 
At 9:45 AM, Blogger Kristi B. said...

hey, what's going on with you?

I tried out a new form of poetry for me. I don't usually write in free verse, but I want you to tell me what you think.

Hope everything's okay.

 

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