Tuesday, September 20, 2005

last night

i wrote a poem earlier i really liked and it got deleted:. i kno i kno. cut and paste it, do it in word then copy it over. ive heard em all and i say phoey. they words in my mind i kno can only be transcribed once and if after they are put to life they are destroyed so be it. there will always be pleanty more, this i kno. so to prove that point i will write another, maybe better, maybe worse, ill leave that for you to decide.


words are obserd
when used to purturb
thats why you must learn
to curb your words
so theyre not used to hurt
i mean who is to deserve
when you use these evil words
you must be paitent
with the gradient
of evil when your sayin it
words are a tool
used more often by fools
to leave us all in duels
with your selves
with our values
with no help
and no real fuel
but to use languange
to make changes
and change faces
what could be greater
then a great liberator
a wordly creator
so use your syntax carefully
and your get baks sparingly
then we can all relax fully care free

1 Comments:

At 2:44 PM, Blogger dont eat the token said...

I can't imagine what you lost on the first one, but I think this one is excellent.

 

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