Wednesday, July 27, 2005

mhm

ive decided that ill also use this to post my poetry...every writer needs an audience so ill start here.

falling
head over heals
turning the wheels
of life
strife
causing the pain
anguish and fear
tonight
but peace
comes like s gentle breeze
freeing you from your needs
alright

4 Comments:

At 4:03 PM, Blogger dont eat the token said...

I like the soft cadence.

 
At 4:38 PM, Blogger jbb said...

i feel so dumb....what the hell is candence?

 
At 5:15 PM, Blogger dont eat the token said...

I guess, the beat.

I know cadence best from bicycling. Keeping the same beat/rhythm going while pedalling, same pace, is cadence.

 
At 11:27 PM, Blogger jbb said...

oh ya well i guess i have some candence in me....lol. i always just called it...shit i dunno i guess candence is a good word for it

 

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